fun
this is good but you have done way better the noises - as always, were very imaginative, but i think they went slightly overboard (just my opinion)
the main thing missing from this piece is the low end, even though that's quite a low kick the whole thing just sounds a little too trebley (although the beginning sounds fine for that) if i were you I'd go on a voyage of snare discovery, that snare didn't fit that well (again just my opinion) but it would work awesome layered with a shorter, more punchy snare
although this review has been mostly negative this is a good tune, not your best but good none the less, i didn't waste my time saying "OMG THIS IZ WINNZOR !!! XD XD"
because I'm sure you'll get enough reviews saying that
Good but didn't do it for me this time... sorry
SB
5,8